Her appealing appearance and overwhelming beauty
Her everlasting white skin and famous equity
Her curative eyes and her mind sinister
Sitting in a garden is a lady of winter
Young lads come and praises her coiffure
Her innocent glances---------implausible
When they see her they cite some phrases
Expressing love and their kindred feelings
The cold mist and snowflakes are happy to see her
Withered trees and bare sky are happy to have her
Behind her lingers the shadows of others
Who once looked at her but now are blur
Finally the sun and summer has gathered
Young lads vanished and snow flakes faded
The deliberate summer murdered the winter
Destroyed the garden and the lady of winter
Dr.Zain
Waoooo great
ReplyDeleteThank you
ReplyDeleteWorth reading for..
ReplyDeleteA thing of beauty is a joy forever..
Plus i love the idea when winter 'faded' ....eventually beauty has to be vainshed.. Nothing is permanent in this world except CHANGE..
Moreover yu create an optimistic aspect of winter's beauty__which is a symbol of death n decay__
creating positive out of negative is your hall mark i must say.. ThumbsUp..:)
nice understanding but im gonna give u a hint then read the poem again
ReplyDeletelady of the winter = this world
summer = the day of judgment
lads = people who wants to enjoy this world which is nothing but a cold winter in reality